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The Magicalness of Life by =NeoAvan001:iconNeoAvan001:



The Magicalness of Life





Sweet! Check out the rainbows
and the sparkly unicorns
all the fluffy bunnies
and roses without thorns

Our beautifully decrepit cities
our awesomely polluted air,
the news spreading creative fiction
and plastic people that never care

A royal idiot for a leader
sending soldiers to die in war,
as if it were a video game,
he has fun by keeping score

We depend on the perfect media
to mold our malleable minds,
forever we love the incessant droning
to it we give our lives

So hip hoop hoorah
we bring destruction in every way
kill the universe, kill the world,
instead of carpe diem, we kill the day …
©2008-2009 =NeoAvan001
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Submitted: March 29, 2008
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This is a sociopolitical satire poem I wrote for an arts benefit earlier this year.
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This poem is sooo right.
It's good to have people that sees what is really appening in this world.
Good job.

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Is love only an illusion?
I'm French so sorry if my English seems bad to some of you.And sorry if I don't understand right away.

SasukexNaruto:heart::heart:
NowakixHiroki:heart:
Thank you.
I really do wish more people would take an elevated
non-conservative view of the world.

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"... one asks oneself this simple question, "What does that mean?". It does not mean anything, because mystery means nothing either, it is unknowable..." - Rene Magritte


Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference.
LOL

You are an AWESOME writer :D

"A royal idiot for a leader
sending soldiers to die in war,
as if it were a video game,
he has fun by keeping score"

I could not agree more!
people really need to read this...
^_^
Thank you so much!

I wish more people would read my writing, but idk how to put it out there...

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"... one asks oneself this simple question, "What does that mean?". It does not mean anything, because mystery means nothing either, it is unknowable..." - Rene Magritte


Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference.
yeah...dev is more of a popularity contest...
the best way to get out there is to do some amazing fan art

who knows...connections could help to ;)
Tis true! lol


I guess I'll start doing some more fanart. lol

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"... one asks oneself this simple question, "What does that mean?". It does not mean anything, because mystery means nothing either, it is unknowable..." - Rene Magritte


Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference.
Wow and I thought you were just great at drawing
thanks, I love to write.

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"... one asks oneself this simple question, "What does that mean?". It does not mean anything, because mystery means nothing either, it is unknowable..." - Rene Magritte


Never argue with an idiot. The people watching might not know the difference.
Har. Love the reference to Carpe Diem in last line. Lovely poem, lovely write. An airy fairy style of magic with an element of dark forces and talk of destuction simmering beneath the surface. Awesome.

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Success is how high you bounce when you hit bottom.
~ General George Patton Jr

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